let it leave me like a long breath

here's the still-left-to-finish list for the first half of the twine game. it's a long list. some of those items would just be three lines of texts, but others are entire sprawling sex scenes.

items marked with a ? are ones that i might just cut entirely if time constraints get too much.
struck out items are completed.

this post will be updated as i cross things off the list

• oral/anal fragments for sex partners in you blurb; something like 'the biggest cock you've swallowed is {djen's wormlike cock} which {sunk all the way down into your stomach as a grotesque writhing tentacle}' for each partner (but with some overlapping in the latter section, like, pthuul and khru would basically be identical
• fix mutation bar to not resort values once you hit 10+ locust points
• entire storm king sequence
  • fucked open by his tentacle cilia / then pumped full of unfertilized eggs
• chain camp sequence
  • first night:
    • tell story of getting fisted
      • pthuul & khru fuck scene
    • tell story of getting pumped full of eggs
      • pthuul & khru leaky / hj scene
    • tell more sedate version
    • fallback hear-them-fucking outside scene
    • no special dealings dialog
    • 'first time' frot/hj scene
  • second night:
    • some other sex scene (yraal or other threesomes/foursomes)
• main plot gheist intro sequence (from outline)
• main plot chain resolve
• main plot chain return
• main plot gheist gameplan (from outline)
• main plot zhalk facefuck closer
• djen camp rejection
• djen camp sex
  • djen repeated night intro splice
  • djen prolapse
  • djen cock intro splice
  • djen cockfucking scene
  • djen top scene
  • djen fist scene
  • (the rest of) djen fuck scene (the intro + the one where yr cock gets tfed is written)
    • make sure the cock-tf scene is hooked up to camprun properly
• djen survey passage
• pthuul camp intro
  • pthuul camp rejection branch
• pthuul camp first time intro edit
• pthuul repeat intro splice
• pthuul first bottom edit
• pthuul bottom 2nd
• ? pthuul bottom 3rd
• pthuul top 1
• pthuul top 2
• ? pthuul top 3
• pthuul survey passage
• khru camp intro
• khru camp rejection
• khru anal closer
• ? khru blow 2
• ? khru blow 3
• khru fist
• khru fist/fuck
• ? khru fist bottom 2
• khru astau intro
  • astau fucks khru
    • you fuck/fist krhu
    • astau fucks you
• khru brulvundojn intro
  • brulvundojn fucks khru
    • you fuck/fist khru
    • khru and brulvundojn fuck you
• gawann camp repeat intro
• gawann initial fuck 1
• gawann initial fuck 2
• gawann camp fuck choice split intro
• gawann fuck him
• gawann throatfuck
• gawann sheathfuck
• ? gawann fuck 3
• gawann survey passage
• yraal camp opening
  • yraal night-one setup
  • yraal rejection branch
• yraal camp repeated opening
• yraal cum reject
• yraal cum accept / make it interface with camprun
• yraal fuck top
• ? yraal oral top
• yraal fist
• yraal cocksound
• yraal survey passage
• jinn camp intro
  • jinn pregnancy splice
  • jinn egglaying spice
  • jinn return fuck choice
  • jinn rejection branch
• jinn egglaying womb scene
• jinn egglaying throatfuck scene
• jinn foreplay splice
  • jinn pre-preg foreplay splice
• jinn fuck mouth
• jinn fuck ass
• jinn fuck cunt
• jinn survey fuck tf logic
• jinn survey tf splices + aftermath
• astau breeding jinn
• astau breeding both
• jinn return, zhalk angry intro
• jinn return, zhalk angry fuck shared intro
  • zhalk fuck (you)
  • zhalk fuck (jinn)
  • zhalk fuck (both)
• zhalk seige resolution blurb
  • zhalk reward fuck top
  • zhalk reward fuck anal
  • zhalk reward fuck cunt
• zhalk completion reward bj interstitial chunks
• timed tf splices
  • pre-buff / buff
  • pre-scales / scales
  • buff arms
  • leathery arms
  • claws
  • wide hips
    • track $from values and use them to specify inciting incident for the wide hip tf
  • leathery hips
  • full legs
  • womb prep / womb
  • pre-leaky / leaky
  • six nipples
  • pre-hands fur / hands fur
• fix all the world map location prompts to hide the option if it's not available (maybe?)
• add in proper worldmap compass directions
• scavenge location revisit blurb
• ::drag back scene blurb
• wandering sire foreplay blurb leading to sex prompt
• wandering sire sound/inject dick
• wandering sire fuck/inject ass
• tf splices for the wandering sire 'fuck' scene
• proper logic for the 'wake' scene after some of the wandering sire sex scenes
• www pair proper first-visit intro blurb
• www pair talk scene
  • maybe have a followup talk where you can actually ask if they've seen any scavenge? V:
• www pair camp scene
• www pair rejection
• www pair spitroast sex scene
• www pair dp sex scene
• www pair impregnation sex scene
• www pair birth resolution scene
• ? www brulvundojn intro
• ? www brulvundojn 4some
  • ? variant you/www beast www human/brulvundojn
  • ? variant you/www human www beast/brulvundojn
• munitions exile canyon intro blurb
• munitions exile dialog path splices
• munitions exile fuck
• munitions exile first time
• recon sex scene restructuring so that his sex scenes run correctly (i.e., do not teleport you) during exile
  • (probably; needs testing)
• general recon exile event structuring
• leader exile sequence (there would be no fucking so it would just be a few short dialog sequences)
• 2ic exile intro blurb
• 2ic exile dialog splices
• 2ic exile sex scene trade bj intro splices
• 2ic exile sex scene return handjob scene
• 2ic exile rejection text
• 2ic exile facefuck sex scene
  • 2ic exile facefuck begging intro
• unfertilized egg-fisting sex scene from survey index
• pregnant survey prompt blurb & verify logic
• pregnant pre-birth camping sequence
• pregnant pre-birth anal
• pregnant pre-birth milking
• pregnant pre-birth hj
• pregnant post-birth fisting
• pregnant post-birth dp
• pregnancy egglaying scene
• brulvundojn not-friends intro
  • brulvundojn not-friends dig / camp dialog
  • brulvundojn apology dialog
• brulvundojn chain talk (from outline)
• brulvundojn fucking-no-knot sex scene
• brulvundojn fucking-with-knot sex scene
• brulvundojn astau(/storm king) fertilization sex scene/splices
• astau introduction dialog
• siege arrival blurb
• THE ENTIRE SEIGE SETUP
  • coherent dialog options for leader
  • progression points for leader
  • coherent dialog options for 2ic
  • progression points for 2ic
  • coherent dialog options for recon
  • progression points for recon
  • verify rook's progression works
  • verify munitions' progression works
    • munitions siege blow scene
    • munitions siege ride scene
    • all munitions talk options
• ? post-exile munitions/khru
• ? post-exile rook/khru/pthuul
• ? post-exile 2ic/pthuul
• ? FINAL SURVEY TEAM GANGBANG