TODAY I: stitched up one of the huge, disconnected sex scenes in the gears of war porn. (which is an interesting definition of progress given how vastly not-finished everything about it continues to be, but we'll deal with that part on a day that's not today.) it's the uh. incestual threesome b/t the carmine brothers scene. where somebody gets a gross monster dick to go w/ his brothers' gross monster dicks.
maybe i will stitch up some more scenes while i'm at it; i'd like to get it more into being chunks of large scene size, rather than having a lot of chunks that are just like, single sentences. that's a little too cut up.
edit, later: so i was thinking abt METRICS and how "one scene" is a lot more of a natural division than "{number} words", and how even though the total number of words written today might not be ~nanowrimo quantity~ or w/e it forms a much more natural sense of "writing progress got made today".
so then i decided to actually check the words written and uhhh it was like 3k more words not even counting all the editing. so. there's that i guess.
maybe i will stitch up some more scenes while i'm at it; i'd like to get it more into being chunks of large scene size, rather than having a lot of chunks that are just like, single sentences. that's a little too cut up.
edit, later: so i was thinking abt METRICS and how "one scene" is a lot more of a natural division than "{number} words", and how even though the total number of words written today might not be ~nanowrimo quantity~ or w/e it forms a much more natural sense of "writing progress got made today".
so then i decided to actually check the words written and uhhh it was like 3k more words not even counting all the editing. so. there's that i guess.
