Oh hey, I'm happy my prompt tickled your fancy! (I'd have replied anonymously but the Captcha service that Dreamwidth uses is having some problems...)
Reeve hadn't designed the Cait Sith doll to have a perfectly accurate sensorium. Who wanted to feel actual pain every time it got ripped limb-from-limb by a mako-twisted monster? ... The core of it was a materia linkage between sibling materia, ...
One of my favorite things about your writing is how you weave in worldbuilding/background details. It makes things feel a lot more concrete.
Reeve made sure he was recording everything.
... Reeve. Oh, Reeve. XD
Red XIII twisted his head to the side, looking away from Cait Sith. He was blushing under the fur.
I think you tend to write Red as the shyer participant a lot of the time - it's cute.
Anyways, I really enjoy your prose. It's always interesting to read and has a lot of texture! Like, for example, the alliteration here:
Its chunky cocktip crested out past its big belly, cock cruder than the cat's, but much, much bigger.
And right afterwars, the variety in the phrase structure is great - it has really nice flow. From the moogle to Red XIII's hindquarters back to the moogle again.
It settled behind Red XIII, watching his lashing tail, the sag of his heavy balls from behind. His asshole was tight, untried, and the moogle idly stroked itself off, smearing lube across its cock, as Red XIII bowed forward, fucking Cait Sith's mouth.
A little longer and they both would've gotten to experience the Cait Sith doll bursting apart at the seams, reduced to little more than a soggy cum balloon.
That... might have ruined the mood. Haha. Do you think that cure works on the robot?
Anyways, your writing is really hot and I love the way that you weave in Reeve's mirrored reactions with the physical scene.
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One of my favorite things about your writing is how you weave in worldbuilding/background details. It makes things feel a lot more concrete.
... Reeve. Oh, Reeve. XD
I think you tend to write Red as the shyer participant a lot of the time - it's cute.
Anyways, I really enjoy your prose. It's always interesting to read and has a lot of texture! Like, for example, the alliteration here:
And right afterwars, the variety in the phrase structure is great - it has really nice flow. From the moogle to Red XIII's hindquarters back to the moogle again.
That... might have ruined the mood. Haha. Do you think that cure works on the robot?
Anyways, your writing is really hot and I love the way that you weave in Reeve's mirrored reactions with the physical scene.
(Also, the fandom at large might not have thought about Reeve being a "suspiciously wealthy furry" but some people have definitely taken notice! e.g.: https://www.tumblr.com/aayemae/712634119730888704/reeve-tuesti-is-a-corporate-furry-and-you-cannot?source=share )